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The Pink Light
by Agatha C. Tea
prompt photo by epic mahoney |
“Hullo, is that young Constable Parkin? Sergeant Mahoney here, I think we have a problem in the field near Tweeksbury. Yes, a problem. Strange coloured lights here by the phone box, and an orange glow over the town. Better track down that London chap who was here enquiring about UFOs this afternoon. I know we pooh-poohed his questions, but perhaps we should have paid more attention. He did say the prime minister and the army were looking into it, but we sent him off with a flea in his ear. No, no, I didn’t say you should flee from here, I said ‘a flea’...oh, never mind. If I hurry, I might catch him before his train leaves. No, no, I didn’t say he trains leaves. How can you train a leaf? I said...hullo? Hullo? Constable Parkin? Are you there, man? Hullo? He must have hung up. That pink light is getting quite bright now, I’d better be on my...”
21 comments:
well! That's that, then!
oip! smiles...this was a fun read...def chuckles...
Aren't you the clever one?? Well done, Kay!
Great story Kay! Those in authority is often impatient.
Hank
Kay, I loved this take on the photo. I haven't heard the term "flea in his ear" since my Mom passed away. :)
Looks like Sgt. Mahoney is going to have a very interesting report to fill out if (when) he returns!
hahahahaha, LOVE it!
I love all that 'train leaves' stuff. We have a great advert like that now that starts off with: I had to avoid a duck (eend in Dutch)and swerved into a tree (boom in Dutch) and ends up with: so you have a bomb (bom) in your Eend (type of car) and they send out the bomb squad!
Very inventive Kay but being well traveled you will know these things happen in Tweekesbury UK all the time.
Lovely Magpie, Kay! By the way, how do you remove the word verificatoin thing? The new one (where did it come from?) is driving me mad!
I downloaded you "Rescued Breed" picture and put it on my blog. I hope it is OK? Best regards, L
Great Job! it was really hard to hear clearly! love your scene!
Emjoyed this, especially the listener's lack of listening skills.
=)
I like this - it does look rather surreal doesn't it?
I liked that you were able to use a one sided conversation to get the whole story told right to the end, where the main character may have had a much longer journey than he anticipated. A very creative response to the prompt, Kay. Thanks so much for sharing it.
Well written, enjoyable...
Love where you took us with this ...
An unusual and witty response, which made me smile.
Goodbye, then, Sergeant Mahoney. You served us well.
Excellent, eerie little story.
Nice one!
And I must say, I LOVE your
'Ban word verification' logo - can I pinch it from you to display on my blogs?
Love this...just great fun and great craft!
Flea! I mean flee!
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