Daryl has such a great eye for composition, color, humor, pathos...and she's married to a real fun guy known as Toonman, so who could resist a combination like that?
I have some fun men and toon guys in my family, so I think I know whereof I speak. Daryl, you are fabulous! Kerry, you're pretty great, too. LOL
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A LOT WORSE
by Kay Davies, 2012
© Daryl Edelstein
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the cowboy’s ghost
couldn’t handle the city
the noise and the lights,
the cars and the fights
(not that they didn’t have fights at home,
but they didn’t have drive-by shootings
and they didn’t have store-window lootings)
so he parked himself
in sombrero and bandana
in front of a strange-looking bull
in a window full of hats
where he decided that
© Daryl Edelstein
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it could be worse...
all those pretty mannequins
in micro-mini-skirts so short
it took his breath away
just to look at them all day
(not that they didn’t have girls at home,
but they wore jeans and shirts
and sombreros and bandanas)
the cowboy’s ghost
© Daryl Edelstein
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then guarded the city,
the girls in their windows,
from his window—
oh, there were things he missed
like sawdust on the floors
and hardwood swinging doors
and coyotes singing love songs to the moon
(not that they didn’t have the moon in the city
but if you blinked fast, you missed it
through the skyscrapers and the lights)
and the cowboy's ghost decided death could be a lot worse
10 comments:
Wow Kay, amazing poem, I love it and the way it speaks.
Brilliant! I love the understatement in the contrasts, the tongue in cheek playing, the seriousness of the contrasts
What a marvelous piece! Very original and creative.
"things he missed
like sawdust on the floors
and hardwood swinging doors
and coyotes singing love songs to the moon"
I love this...these descriptive details drew me right in. Excellent poem, Kay!!
Fantastic poem - love cowboys singing love songs to the moon.
Awesome post. Love the poem.
This is great!! I guess the cowboy ghost gone urban cowboy decided to just embrace his eternity. :)
Wow! This is excellent, Kay. I love how you found a thread in the pictures, and your cowboy ghost with his ironic asides won my heart.
Good to see that that cowpoke is staying busy in the afterlife! Very imaginative and entertaining take on Daryl's photographs, Kay.
EXCELLENT. I love how you wove in all three photos, seamlessly. Such a lulling rhythm to this. I love this cowboy ghost, and wish him well.
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