 Over at the Imaginary Garden with Real Toads, my friend Hedgewitch has insisted that the Flash 55 challenge produce exactly, precisely 55 words, no more, no less: a challenge within a challenge, for me. Last time, I believe I managed 54 words, but I tried to do better this time. Count carefully, Kay, I muttered, et voilá, it's 55 words. Some even rhyme.
Over at the Imaginary Garden with Real Toads, my friend Hedgewitch has insisted that the Flash 55 challenge produce exactly, precisely 55 words, no more, no less: a challenge within a challenge, for me. Last time, I believe I managed 54 words, but I tried to do better this time. Count carefully, Kay, I muttered, et voilá, it's 55 words. Some even rhyme.Uh-oh, I just noticed Hedge says it is Flash Fiction 55, but mine isn't exactly fictitious. O well, can't win 'em all, and all that.
Sigh.
Next month, Flash 55 will be hosted by one of Hedge's cohorts, either Mama Zen or Fireblossom, whoever comes first.
| Mule Deer | 
when I was fifty-five,
finding myself still alive,
I thought I might strive
for something new.
what did I do?
I left all I knew:
(having packed up everything
that was worth taking)
then made my way
across the Rockies
to the place where the deer
and the antelope play.
(written today,
by Kay)
| Pronghorn Antelope | 
Photos by
Richard Schear
Richard Schear
 
 
8 comments:
Kay, your 55 is delightful!
I'm so glad you did!
and you are quite a dear :) ~
Loved your poem. There comes a turning point in everyone's life. What a nice one you had.
Hari OM
...and now you leave us wondering... YAM xx
No worries on the fictional aspect, Kay. I'm happy you were able to tell a clear and entertaining story in 55 words. Mine aren't usually fiction, either. Thanks for counting.
Kay... leaving it all and find a new place.. daring but reviving.. .your use of rhymes is almost worthy of a rap-artist...
Seems like you made a very good life choice.
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