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Showing posts with label snowball form. Show all posts
Showing posts with label snowball form. Show all posts

Saturday, November 5, 2011

Weekend Writers' Retreat: more snowballs

Grandma, of Grandma's Goulash, hosts Weekend Writers' Retreat,
where we can have some fun showing off our new skills, or
reintroducing some of our old ones.

I was recently introduced to the French discipline of training writers to write better by giving them constraints—defined parameters within which to work and to write.
I was particularly taken with the "Snowball" poem wherein each line is one word, and each word is one letter longer than the previous line.
I don't think every poem has to begin with a one-letter word, which I have tried to do here, but I am just learning this new structure.

As you see, I started off with nine lines in my first Snowball, and the following three each have eleven lines. I think my mind boggles at the thought of 12-letter words, or, as they used to call them, "Ten dollar words."

I
am
out—
free,
alive,
seeing
wonders
wherever
perceived.

I
go
off,
down
steps,
toward
ravines:
admiring,
absorbing,
collecting,
discovering.

O
it
has
been
dizzy,
lovely
delight,
deciding
astrology
outsmarted
scientology.




O
on
top
they
place
padded
benches
randomly
assisting
population
continuation.

Wednesday, November 2, 2011

For "Real Toads" — Snowball and Univocalism

Kenia, a member of the writers' group Imaginary Garden with Real Toads, has presented several different writing challenges today. I have already responded to two of them, and herewith offer a "Snowball" (each line is one word, and each is one letter longer than the previous word). Here, also, is my best attempt at something called "Univocalism" in which only one vowel sound is allowed, but various forms of that sound may be used, once each, as I understand it. More than a trifle limiting, but interesting nevertheless. Thanks, Kenia. That's all from me today.
K

SNOWBALL
O
to
see
Rome,
Paris,
London!
Walking,
enjoying,
endlessly
whispering
confidences.
Togetherness:
international
philosophizing. 



Univocalism

1.

Yea,
fey Sergei’s
sleigh relays
ballet.

2.

Vitamin A
purée
decays, eh?