"Look at this! Soap to keep us afloat when we take our baths in the ocean."
"Yeah, and we won't have to scrub ourselves with sand any more."
140 characters pre-cisely, if I do say so myself.
Posted for Microfiction Monday, the writers' meme presented every week by Susan at Stony River. Here's how it works. On Sunday evening, or thereabouts, Susan posts a prompt in the form of a photo or a drawing, whereupon we, the intrepid writers, compose a story or poem inspired by the prompt, using only 140 characters including spaces and punctuation, 140 characters being the maximum length of a "tweet"! This is particularly helpful to people who have a terrible habit of overwriting, definitely one of my shortcomings, I must admit.
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Sand scrub? Whatever floats their boats!
ReplyDeleteThey might still want to scrub with sand - exfoliating, you know ;-)
ReplyDeleteThose boys are in serious trouble if they're scrubbing with sand!! I love it, Kay! Fun take on the pic of the day!! Hope you have a great week!
ReplyDeleteSylvia
Ouch! Sand baths! Very good take on the picture. Enjoy your week :)
ReplyDeleteI didn't think sailors could swim.
ReplyDeleteI've never used sand to scrub my face. Glad I'm not stuck on an Island somewhere!
ReplyDeleteGood one Kay, it made me laugh and say "ouch"
Sand scrubs would be fine . . long as they don't leave sand in their bathers.
ReplyDeleteNot sure I'd like the sand scrub, but liked your words :-)
ReplyDeletescrubbing in sand- loved this idea :D
ReplyDeletegood one!!
Hehe! Funny, Kay! :)
ReplyDeleteLovely Micro Fiction, Kay : )
ReplyDeleteI just used t scrub my body with soil..hee..hee..hee but I don't need a soap...cause soap come with water..no good ! but Lindy and Dick might love it : )
Please Have a great day : )
xxxx
Good take on this one. Anything would beat a sand bath. Rough!
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by.
Scrub with sand! love it- thanks.
ReplyDeleteNow sand would be a painful exfoliant, wouldn't it?! Hop in boys!
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Oh, I'm so glad they found the soap on the beach...no more gritty sand baths! LOL! :) Good one, Kay!
ReplyDelete~Jean
Ooh, washing with sand? Nasty!
ReplyDeleteThat sand can get places where the sun don't shine... Glad they're rid of it.
ReplyDeleteHave a great week.
Good thing! Sand scrub sounds painful.
ReplyDeleteLots of soap in the stories this week...I enjoyed yours...thanks...
ReplyDeleteLol! Love it!
ReplyDelete¸.•´♥Elizabeth
Very cute! Hope I never encounter these two scrubbing away at the beach!
ReplyDeleteOoooo.... owwww.... sand to scrub with? I'm so glad they got rescued by soap. :-)
ReplyDeleteI don't blame them!
ReplyDeleteSand scrub? Hmmm, maybe. :)
ReplyDeletesand scrub is a great exfoliator. at least they will have smooth skin. lol
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