tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post5964220837073083694..comments2024-03-09T02:05:54.509-07:00Comments on An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel: Toads' Sunday Mini-Challenge: JuejuKay L. Davieshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-73293049862803913452013-10-20T22:53:17.770-06:002013-10-20T22:53:17.770-06:00How did I miss this?! Was I sick?!
I too miss the...How did I miss this?! Was I sick?!<br />I too miss the sea and your verse has the ebb n' flow I love~<br /><br />I love these lines, too:<br />"your need is always to be free,<br />to come and go at night or noon"...<br /><br />Beautiful! :DEllahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-9783502692762844362012-10-22T18:58:58.331-06:002012-10-22T18:58:58.331-06:00your need is always to be free,
to come and go at ...your need is always to be free,<br />to come and go at night or noon,<br /><br />Just gorgeous! I like the seven per line, and your words are wisely chosen. Susurrating... ? Love that. rhythmic roars then, sighing... Just lots of wonderful imagery. Obviously written by someone who knows the water intimately.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-76936980217875202962012-10-22T09:44:37.136-06:002012-10-22T09:44:37.136-06:00your need is always to be free..
I love this line...your need is always to be free..<br /><br />I love this line, Kay, and the poem is so filled with longing and sadness, two emotions which the sea is apt to stir up in me.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-18885129241241584642012-10-22T08:35:23.155-06:002012-10-22T08:35:23.155-06:00The Sea is everything you describe ~~ and more. L...The Sea is everything you describe ~~ and more. Lovely!!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-72075114845617323852012-10-22T08:25:23.896-06:002012-10-22T08:25:23.896-06:00the images your words bring to mind are some wonde...the images your words bring to mind are some wonderful memories i almost forgot .. thank youDarylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-75059133114750446822012-10-22T07:30:28.393-06:002012-10-22T07:30:28.393-06:00beautiful poem - beautiful poem - Brother Olliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-56011088803845864402012-10-22T05:44:29.523-06:002012-10-22T05:44:29.523-06:00The alliteration is a great fit for the topic with...The alliteration is a great fit for the topic with the s and r sounds...really brings the sound of sea...your last line is brilliant, Kay...only influenced by the moon!!! Wonderful!!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-83823863079406593322012-10-21T21:54:55.835-06:002012-10-21T21:54:55.835-06:00Very sonorous verse. Well done!
Madeleine Begun K...Very sonorous verse. Well done!<br /><a href="http://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/" rel="nofollow">Madeleine Begun Kane</a>Madeleine Begun Kanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12290268300271622956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-27125424319701597012012-10-21T21:19:20.286-06:002012-10-21T21:19:20.286-06:00Looks like our side of the world, White Rock? - Ma...Looks like our side of the world, White Rock? - MargyPowell River Bookshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17580698518291129041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-7259395992161965222012-10-21T20:42:35.398-06:002012-10-21T20:42:35.398-06:00Beautiful work Kay! A wonderful sense of flow and ...Beautiful work Kay! A wonderful sense of flow and rhythm--Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-59603170273884864132012-10-21T20:13:46.797-06:002012-10-21T20:13:46.797-06:00Beautiful romance with the sea. It really does se...Beautiful romance with the sea. It really does seem to have the power of love within its waves.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-77812815326485706832012-10-21T18:41:38.044-06:002012-10-21T18:41:38.044-06:00Very nice.Very nice.Hannah Pratthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03241656929267868673noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-27825668389283021452012-10-21T18:25:37.081-06:002012-10-21T18:25:37.081-06:00I am in love with the sea so appreciate this more ...I am in love with the sea so appreciate this more than I can say here..Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-42451705116092765772012-10-21T17:29:34.575-06:002012-10-21T17:29:34.575-06:00A rhythm that we can count on, at least no false p...A rhythm that we can count on, at least no false promises ground your love!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-59106708801525051312012-10-21T15:31:11.198-06:002012-10-21T15:31:11.198-06:00Sorry to be obvious, but it flows, like the subjec...Sorry to be obvious, but it flows, like the subject itself. And sighs and heaves and does all sorts of things. :-)Janine Bolléehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857073674960699155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-73012902539754597702012-10-21T14:30:48.053-06:002012-10-21T14:30:48.053-06:00Lovely pictures of the beach ~ Nice capture of the...Lovely pictures of the beach ~ Nice capture of the sea who wants to be free ~ Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-4843134091844200732012-10-21T13:12:09.213-06:002012-10-21T13:12:09.213-06:00Ah yes, that sea is definitely a fickle lover!! A...Ah yes, that sea is definitely a fickle lover!! Always coming and going.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-49686673362224973422012-10-21T12:48:52.236-06:002012-10-21T12:48:52.236-06:00Very beautiful, and my favorite topic. Lovely, Kay...Very beautiful, and my favorite topic. Lovely, Kay!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com