tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post4916264137380930972..comments2024-03-09T02:05:54.509-07:00Comments on An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel: Microfiction Monday #67, under the bridgeKay L. Davieshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-44003656008263817972011-01-24T19:33:44.726-07:002011-01-24T19:33:44.726-07:00Kay, how creative! Boy everyone was so different ...Kay, how creative! Boy everyone was so different with this one.Susan Fobeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10927064519907342393noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-23802087404716866712011-01-24T14:07:59.530-07:002011-01-24T14:07:59.530-07:00Oh, so cute! I wonder what Susan thinks of all of ...Oh, so cute! I wonder what Susan thinks of all of our entries and the kind of thoughts her photos provoke!<br /><br /><a href="http://elizabethmueller.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">♥.•*¨ Elizabeth ¨*•.♥</a>Elizabeth Muellerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06028099814857743134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-70815115441096673472011-01-24T13:08:12.546-07:002011-01-24T13:08:12.546-07:00As in the damn dam broke? Very provocative!As in the damn dam broke? Very provocative!SouthLakesMomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08822510653198676631noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-50922914010620347162011-01-24T09:25:44.270-07:002011-01-24T09:25:44.270-07:00Great plot for a sci-fi/fantasy movie. I'd go ...Great plot for a sci-fi/fantasy movie. I'd go see it!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01169693305157071792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-54344608546466229092011-01-24T07:18:04.049-07:002011-01-24T07:18:04.049-07:00Fantastic misty!
Looks like a movie scenery!
LéiaFantastic misty!<br />Looks like a movie scenery!<br />LéiaCezar and Léiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14408385000169533010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-35749833558153096302011-01-24T06:09:16.612-07:002011-01-24T06:09:16.612-07:00Funny when it's make-believe, but another matt...Funny when it's make-believe, but another matter altogether when it's true. Nice one, Kay :-)jabbloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-63910115560679086382011-01-24T05:53:02.674-07:002011-01-24T05:53:02.674-07:00Wow- tight fit though- satellite
village? a castl...Wow- tight fit though- satellite <br />village? a castle mayhap? Thanks!izzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06379007428464069723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-19523481553240812542011-01-24T05:08:02.418-07:002011-01-24T05:08:02.418-07:00Sci-Fi!!!Sci-Fi!!!G-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-11630666444901808922011-01-24T02:06:23.266-07:002011-01-24T02:06:23.266-07:00Ah, the madness of mankind. Great words.Ah, the madness of mankind. Great words.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-41229022089962534292011-01-23T23:32:48.726-07:002011-01-23T23:32:48.726-07:00Nice one. An entire setting described in just a fe...Nice one. An entire setting described in just a few words of dialogue.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-17006550444555493022011-01-23T22:35:54.061-07:002011-01-23T22:35:54.061-07:00The Lost City...eerie! I like it, Kay.The Lost City...eerie! I like it, Kay.Pathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04587300140099806425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-33127669961960806212011-01-23T22:19:57.017-07:002011-01-23T22:19:57.017-07:00Fumes! oh no! they'd better get on outa there....Fumes! oh no! they'd better get on outa there. Very nice take on it, makes me want to read more.Maria@BubblegumandDuctTapehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15662116090938892495noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-77968122670850849772011-01-23T22:13:32.234-07:002011-01-23T22:13:32.234-07:00There's something unbearably sad about drowned...There's something unbearably sad about drowned villages.Rinkly Rimeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-44797555986181825192011-01-23T21:59:22.271-07:002011-01-23T21:59:22.271-07:00There could be anything down there really. Spooky ...There could be anything down there really. Spooky Micro but I liked it. Your dog is adorable too :)KBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02621937316200868307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-7654495097485067842011-01-23T21:05:46.258-07:002011-01-23T21:05:46.258-07:00Fumes is an excellent word choice and gives great ...Fumes is an excellent word choice and gives great heft to this wonderful story.<br /><br />Hope you have a wonderful week.Michael G-Ghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07947421844294471304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-38372814642147108332011-01-23T20:59:46.643-07:002011-01-23T20:59:46.643-07:00Really a unique plot, Kay! :) I like.
This remin...Really a unique plot, Kay! :) I like.<br />This reminds me of Sodom and Gomorrah.<br />They are now at the bottom of the Dead Sea.<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-29413158640540485202011-01-23T20:41:33.003-07:002011-01-23T20:41:33.003-07:00Ah--fumes to the underworld...good mm this week. C...Ah--fumes to the underworld...good mm this week. Cheers!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-57264504484336040632011-01-23T20:33:52.586-07:002011-01-23T20:33:52.586-07:00A city turned to fumes and dust!
Very intriguing; ...A city turned to fumes and dust!<br />Very intriguing; tell us more.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-58296737965852008242011-01-23T18:28:41.575-07:002011-01-23T18:28:41.575-07:00It sounds like a very apocalyptic tale, good one K...It sounds like a very apocalyptic tale, good one Kay.SquirrelQueenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00634513897599275287noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-38029919533531711122011-01-23T18:28:19.841-07:002011-01-23T18:28:19.841-07:00Ah... must have been global warming, hunh?Ah... must have been global warming, hunh?Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07461569436322815787noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-48664496718777191872011-01-23T18:27:02.361-07:002011-01-23T18:27:02.361-07:00could be a true story some day if we don't cha...could be a true story some day if we don't change our ways<br />well doneDiannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02946500110072411468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-50209728923171383402011-01-23T18:10:23.645-07:002011-01-23T18:10:23.645-07:00It gave me a fun sci-fi feel to it. Great one!!! ...It gave me a fun sci-fi feel to it. Great one!!! :O)Dianehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07604687906788800639noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-91598350168958968132011-01-23T17:59:06.530-07:002011-01-23T17:59:06.530-07:00Love the implications of the word "fumes"...Love the implications of the word "fumes"! Neat micro!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-55364354925248974192011-01-23T17:36:49.909-07:002011-01-23T17:36:49.909-07:00Makes you think, one wonders if they are looking d...Makes you think, one wonders if they are looking down at a world they once knew. Nice Microfiction.Bill ~ {The Old Fart}https://www.blogger.com/profile/00979105814731080466noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-18738799918949826192011-01-23T17:11:26.892-07:002011-01-23T17:11:26.892-07:00Ah! Like the fumes and lost city. Very good.Ah! Like the fumes and lost city. Very good.Soniahttp://storytreasury.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com