tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post484176929100905108..comments2024-03-09T02:05:54.509-07:00Comments on An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel: For Real Toads: a work of loveKay L. Davieshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-69859324485272764172013-03-08T01:00:34.154-07:002013-03-08T01:00:34.154-07:00Welcome home! Sorry about the theft, but so glad y...Welcome home! Sorry about the theft, but so glad you had a good time. Love the poem!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-9364783443476429362013-03-07T17:30:00.939-07:002013-03-07T17:30:00.939-07:00Why does something always happen to mess up a perf...Why does something always happen to mess up a perfect vacation? (Well, in my experience, anyway.)My wallet was stolen like that in Mexico City--gosh, the stress is unbelievable, so this poem is even more exceptional, coming out of those feelings. Izy has quoted my fave lines...great job with the prompt, Kay, and welcome back.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-39452045215297032092013-03-07T16:55:31.846-07:002013-03-07T16:55:31.846-07:00Wow I am impressed with how you wove the words int...Wow I am impressed with how you wove the words into this so smoothly! A lovely write and tribute to a love.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-13778890504673787062013-03-07T16:28:45.339-07:002013-03-07T16:28:45.339-07:00Those last two lines linger. So sad, and so beauti...Those last two lines linger. So sad, and so beautiful. De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-414448139797742582013-03-07T09:06:34.865-07:002013-03-07T09:06:34.865-07:00I also love the lines that Izy has highlighted, an...I also love the lines that Izy has highlighted, and your use of work related words is so very clever.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-49956783002596826232013-03-07T07:38:47.103-07:002013-03-07T07:38:47.103-07:00welcome home!welcome home!Darylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-60092126061911894722013-03-07T07:27:01.666-07:002013-03-07T07:27:01.666-07:00Kay, i LOVE this poem. just love it inside and out...Kay, i LOVE this poem. just love it inside and out. wow.<br />welcome back!!Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-22144807698753144902013-03-07T02:37:58.448-07:002013-03-07T02:37:58.448-07:00Glad you had a god time:) Theft is never nice, but...Glad you had a god time:) Theft is never nice, but all in all a good time. The furballs say hello :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07748575002935939688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-20987408814711908072013-03-06T21:14:25.448-07:002013-03-06T21:14:25.448-07:00Welcome back home, Kay! While I felt this piece d...Welcome back home, Kay! While I felt this piece did a great job of capturing the yearning and rebirth of desire...I very much enjoyed your word play in the third stanza, which I found to be an astonishingly strong end:<br /><br />here are dead lines<br />on my forehead<br />as I double shift<br />my sports car past the house<br />where once we lived,<br />where once we loved<br /><br />deadlinesIsadora Gruyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13036782300945079952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-83563686286119433682013-03-06T19:42:28.290-07:002013-03-06T19:42:28.290-07:00I'm glad everything on the cruise went well si...I'm glad everything on the cruise went well since the other Carnival ship was a nightmare. Hope you are recuperating well.Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07461569436322815787noreply@blogger.com