tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post2229965136154794719..comments2024-03-09T02:05:54.509-07:00Comments on An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel: For Real Toads: Ella's ancestor challengeKay L. Davieshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-17590374712400307752012-07-23T23:31:53.096-06:002012-07-23T23:31:53.096-06:00so typical for that day, a woman who lost his man ...so typical for that day, a woman who lost his man at sea. good choice.<br /><br /><a href="http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2012/07/23/four-child-with-book-senryu/" rel="nofollow">4 child with book senryu</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-59014246599736829172012-07-23T19:52:27.555-06:002012-07-23T19:52:27.555-06:00I like the external and internal dialogue ~ Very l...I like the external and internal dialogue ~ Very lovely share ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-40849907286755953852012-07-23T19:35:49.349-06:002012-07-23T19:35:49.349-06:00Well Done and so likely true! I love the way you w...Well Done and so likely true! I love the way you wrote it ;DEllahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-17415009978533093712012-07-23T18:43:34.119-06:002012-07-23T18:43:34.119-06:00You create such wonderful visions. Wonderful.You create such wonderful visions. Wonderful.Jenn Jilkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05259681360456905055noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-46078614176657314352012-07-23T18:18:41.375-06:002012-07-23T18:18:41.375-06:00Beautiful take on the photo. Death is a hard adjus...Beautiful take on the photo. Death is a hard adjustment for the living. <br /><br />I cannot help thinking of the story "The Story of an Hour" by Kate Chopin, in which the widow has the opposite reaction--but she and her husband were not that lose.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-82537286388275061182012-07-23T17:57:14.719-06:002012-07-23T17:57:14.719-06:00There's always a sea of tears behind every wom...There's always a sea of tears behind every woman's daytime face. I love this:<br /><br />"but her hair fell into her eye;<br />and gave her an excuse to cry"<br /><br />I like the different treatments you gave the narrative section and the following expression of her deepest thoughts.<br /><br />flipsiderecords.wordpress.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360427196522365144.post-28190077151235158482012-07-23T12:15:10.100-06:002012-07-23T12:15:10.100-06:00Kay I like the way you arranged this poem in the t...Kay I like the way you arranged this poem in the two parts. Sad story.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.com