In his sonnet, ''The World is Too Much With Us", Kerry sees Wordsworth bemoaning the fact that we have lost our place in the natural environment, and no longer appreciate the gods in nature.
Great God! I’d rather be
A Pagan suckled in a creed outworn;
So might I, standing on this pleasant lea,
Have glimpses that would make me less forlorn;
Have sight of Proteus rising from the sea;
Or hear old Triton blow his wreathèd horn.
Kerry provided us with a link to the old Celtic deities, and I tried to feel something for some of them, but my poem brought me back, not to the land of my Celtic forefathers, but to the shores of my birth...British Columbia's Fraser River, and the Pacific Ocean.
My father, Gordon Davies, wrote books about the rivers of British Columbia, and he was known to mention river gods now and then, but this poem is my own.
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| Taku chief, Tlingit people, 1913 |
the water gods, we knew them well
we learned them at our father’s side
they kept harpies from the streams
held back the ice from oceans wide
the river gods the Haida knew,
the Salish and the Kwatna, too,
fished and fought in wood canoes
Celtic gods, First Nations gods,
all protected salmon streams:
Icaunis and Arausio, knew fish
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| Bill Reid's carving of the Haida god Raven releasing the first humans from a seashell |
were stuff of people’s dreams
the river gods my father knew
taught him the things
he taught us, too
Kay Davies, September 18, 2013
Photo source: Wikipedia


I love this. In fact I am going to do some research in to water gods. I think we ought to pay homage to them on the barge xxx
ReplyDeleteNicely done, Kay. I am glad to meet these Gods.
ReplyDeleteGood morning, Kay! I think you're all wet!
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;-)
Aw, you know I'm teasing. I liked that you stuck close to your roots with this, and i like the picture of the chief!
I'm so glad you kicked off this challenge with such a wonderfully evocative poem, Kay. I got goosebumps reading about the link between poet, parent and the old gods, however we care to name them.
ReplyDeleteHari OM
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Prairie mists - ethereal beauty
Lindy set - love personified
Little Gods - all help us find The One. Lovely recognition. YAM xx
This is a beautiful tribute to the water gods.
ReplyDeleteThis is really lovely. Great flow and structure.
ReplyDeleteVery cool. I alway say the First Nation are the ones who can teach us celts our tribal roots!
ReplyDeleteYour rhymes are sensational...they just carry your reader along...I love the timelessness of this...it feels like peering down the halls of time...generations of story being passed form ear to eager ear. Beautiful, Kay!
ReplyDeleteI love this so much. One of your best, kiddo! I love that you used First Nations gods. Love the names woven thru the poem.
ReplyDeleteI like the last stanza.
ReplyDeleteThe river gods still take are of our waterways in spite of man’s best efforts to pollute them.
ReplyDeleteA poem like yours brings home to us what we could lose.
This may be my second comment here, but I had to come back to the importance of the fish and their protections. We may need to rejuvenate the old or invent new more potent gods to protect our fish. Meanwhile, I am taken back to your major poetic challenge from the rhythms and content of this song. So Beautiful--despite taking you from humor into serious territory.
ReplyDeleteand taught us, too. I'm intrigued by the First Nations pantheon, now, Kay. ~ M
ReplyDeleteThis sounds so ancient itself. Nice.
ReplyDeleteKay,
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful! It reads like a song.
I love the personal nod in your ending! I love all the offerings listed-especially the salmon :D
ReplyDeleteYOU always bring it!
What a wonderful piece Kay...Oh that fathers would have better taught their offspring the beauty of protecting our water.
ReplyDeleteClearly you've learned from the best! :)
ReplyDeleteHow are you, Kay?
ReplyDeleteI wrote a poem this week. Finally!
Cheers from Cottage Country Ontario , ON, Canada!
lore and nostalgia - perfect. I also really like the idea of that statue - humans being birthed by a great sea turtle.
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